Sorry about the delay :(

Sorry about the delay, really thought the chapter would be posted already but ran into a small issue with the critique. Also, chapter 14 looks very much like it's going to become chapters 14 and 15. Shouldn't be long now if you're waiting. All the major work is done on the chapter(s). I still long for the day that I can write more often and longer. Stay warm everybody, below zero where I'm at right now. Really, really cold.